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《新闻两则》导学简案

发表时间:2021-12-3 17:52:02 来源:成都市第三十三中学校 编辑:成都铁中红旗校区

1、《新闻两则》导学简案

【学习目标】

1.了解新闻的六要素和新闻结构的五部分。理清文章内容、层次并体会本文语言准确、简洁、情感鲜明的特点。

2.把握课文中的人物、事件。认识中国人民解放军英勇善战创造了人类战争史上的伟大奇迹,认识中国革命的胜利来之不易。珍惜革命成果,珍惜我们现在的生活。

3、培养阅读新闻的好习惯。

【自主预习】

1、熟读全文,并标出段落序号。请家长签字证明:             

2、给下列加下划线字注音:

  )    ) 绥靖        )   阻遏(        (   )   退(  )

灭(   )  锐不可   ) 要    )    港(      )

3、了解作者和写作背景,积累文学常识。

①作者毛泽东:新中国的缔造者,伟大的政治家、革命家、军事家。

②写作背景:1949年初,淮海、辽沈、平津三大战役结束,我人民解放军在全国取得胜利已成定局。但国民党反动政府依然负隅顽抗,在对长江防线经过三个半月的苦心经营之后,于420日悍然拒绝签订国内和平协定。421日,毛主席和朱德总司令立即发布了《向全国进军的命令》,我人民解放军于该日凌晨发起了渡江战役。222时,新华社播发了毛泽东同志撰写的消息《我三十万大军胜利南渡长江》,报道了中路军万船齐发,突破敌阵,占领南岸广大地区的战况。22日夜,毛泽东同志又撰写了全面报道前线最新战况的新闻稿《人民解放军百万大军横渡长江》。

4、新闻的概念:                                                                     

广义的新闻:                                                                                                                                                   

狭义的新闻:                                                                                                                                             

5、新闻的四特点:                                                                                                         

6、(狭义)新闻(即消息)的五结构:                                                                                                                                               

7、新闻的六要素:                                                                      

【研读《我三十万大军胜利南渡长江》】

8、阅读课文,分析这则新闻的结构。

标题:                                                                              

导语:                                                                         

主体:                                                                              

结语:                                                                               

9、试分析本则新闻标题中包含了哪些方面的信息。

                                                                                        

                                                                                     

10、仔细阅读课文,找出这则新闻的要素。

时间:                                                                                   

地点:                                                                                  

人物:                                                                                    

事件:                                                                                      

11、研读课文,品味语言。

 ⑴你能找出本文中带有作者主观感情倾向的词句吗?并加以简要分析。

                                                                                          

                                                                                             

                                                                                           

                                                                                      

⑵ 品味“长江风平浪静,我军万船齐放,直取对岸。”句中蕴含的感情。

                                                                                       

                                                                                     

⑶品味 “不到二十四小时,三十万人民解放军即已突破敌阵,占领南岸广大地区,现正向繁昌、铜陵、青阳、荻港、鲁港诸城进击中。”句中加粗的词和加下划线的词表达的情感。

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                                         

12、将课文与以下这篇消息进行比较,找出异同。

我军横渡长江情景

新华社长江前线1949423日电  前线记者阎吾报道人民解放军在安庆、芜湖间某地敌前强波长江时的情景称:21日黄昏,江北某地解放军的阵地上空,突然升起银光四射的发光弹,顷刻,整个北岸阵地发出了震天动地的雷鸣,从解放军的炮兵阵地上,无数道火线飞向南岸,接着整个南岸国民党军的阵地就完全陷于一片火海中。炽烈的炮火映红了江面和天空。接着,从各个港口涌出了无数只大小船只。它们立即散布江面,像箭似的向南飞驶而去。北岸的江边,站满当地的居民、民工和解放军的指战员,大家都屏息凝视着火光掩映的江面,等侯着。忽然,在南岸飞起了登陆的信号,枪炮声、喊杀声连续不断。北岸所有的人们立时迸发出一片欢呼:“过去了!”“过去了!”无数船只继续从各港口涌出来,加速向对岸驶去。对岸的解放军则开始不断发出前进的信号,和响起前后各部队间联络的号音。在宽阔的江面上,解放军的指挥灯不断闪耀着。渐渐的枪炮声、喊杀声越来越远了。工兵们紧张地搭起许多码头,无数民工忙着把无数的弹药、器材、粮食、蔬菜送到船上,随着大军运过江去。这时,在大江南岸,布满着无数匆匆登岸的解放军,到处可以听到船工们和解放军战士们兴奋而亲热的告别声:“同志们,再见了!”“老乡们,辛苦了!南京再见!

(选自《东北日报》,1949425日)

                                                                                          

                                                                                        

                                                                                          

 

【研读《人民解放军百万大军横渡长江》】

13、文常填空:

①新闻的概念是:                                                                        

②广义的新闻是:                                                                      

③狭义的新闻是:                                                                       

④新闻的特点是:          性、         性、         性,其中主要特征就是        

⑤新闻的要素是:                                                                            

⑥新闻的结构是:                                                                               

⑦简介这则新闻作者:                                                                        

14、请指出这则新闻的六要素

时间:                                                                                                

地点:                                                                                       

人物:                                                                                    

事件起因:                                                                                

事件经过和结果:                                                                             

                                                                                     

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

15、找出这则新闻的标题、电头、导语和主体,概括导语和主体的内容。

标题:                                                                                      

电头:                                                                                        

导语:                                                                                     

主体:                                                                                     

16、简要分析标题特点:

                                                                                           

17、简要分析电头内容:

                                                                                         

                                                                                            

18、分析导语的语言特点:

                                                                                                  

                                                                                      

                                                                                           

19、分清主体部分的层次,并将其依照以下内容列成表格(自附加纸)

 

渡江部队    渡江地点    渡江时间   渡江兵力     渡过兵力

 

20、主体部分为什么按“中路军、西路军、东路军”的顺序安排?

                                                                                               

                                                                                             

                                                                                          

21、这三个层次是怎样紧密衔接在一起的?有哪些语句使三个层次连接成一个整体?

                                                                                       

                                                                                       

                                                                                       

22、三路大军的渡江情况,哪路详写?哪路略写?为什么要这样安排?

                                                                                                

                                                                                        

                                                                                              

23、本则新闻对西路军渡江情况进行了简要的议论。在报道战况中插入议论有什么作用?这两方面的议论为何一略一详?两方面的顺序颠倒一下好不好?为什么?

                                                                                               

                                                                                                

                                                                                             

24、本文语言准确、简明、凝练、概括性强,同时又鲜明、生动、富于感情色彩。请就以下例句加以揣摩体会。

① 二十日夜起,长江北岸人民解放军中路军首先突破安庆、芜湖线,渡至繁昌、铜陵、青阳、荻港、鲁港地区,二十四小时内即已渡过三十万人。二十一日下午五时起,我西路军开始渡江,地点在九江、安庆段。至发电时止,该路三十五万人民解放军已渡过三分之二,余部二十三日可渡完。(句中黑体词依次换成“越过”、“到达”、“共”,“现在”、“剩下的”,比较哪个词更好。)

                                                                                               

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

                                                                                             

②然在二十一日下午至二十二日下午的整天激战中,我已歼灭及击溃一切抵抗之敌,占领扬中、镇压、江阴诸县的广大地区,并控制江阴要塞,封锁长江。我军前锋,业已切断镇江无锡段铁路线。(“歼灭及击溃”能否换成“消灭”? “控制” 、“封锁” 、”切断”三个动词能否互换使用?)

                                                                                      

                                                                                     

                                                                                          

 

③西路军所遇之抵抗是“甚为微弱”,而东路军所遇之抵抗则“较为顽强”。体会句中黑体词的妙处。

                                                                                               

                                                                                   

④“不料正是汤恩伯到芜湖的那一天”能否换成“结果就在21日那一天”?

                                                                                          

                                                                                            

⑤文中用语鲜明生动,富于感情色彩的例子还很多,请再举一例。

                                                                                              

 

⑥文中很多带有文言色彩的词语,例如:“均是”、“即已”、“业已”、“至……止”、“所遇之”、“甚为”、“然”、“诸县”等等。请反复诵读,品味其妙处。

                                                                                          

                                                                                     

                                                                                       



来源:成都市第三十三中学校  编辑:成都铁中红旗校区